Oh, I forgot-we were supposed to comment on that essay from last Saturday.
Well, I thought the essay was rather uninterestuing/boring until the writer mentioned missing her home and Mother. It was only then she got my attention. I think she should have woven that information into her piece. She also didn't explain why her part of the fridge was so bare (only water and health bar?) Again, it needed more information about the connection of "home/Mom" to that.
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